Jonas's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wooden Binary Sword]

How did you make a wooden sword without wood? Was the wood saw made of wood? That wood make sense.

8madness responds:

excuse me, but I think you read wrong the comment.

[Jokes]

I can't tell jokes because I'm a comedian.

ToonHole responds:

I can write an unfunny response because I'm... fuck.

[.:Prince Of Anthropomorphism:.]

Really good colors, but you need to work on your line weights, and pay attention to the details as well.

You show a good sense of composition, but your monster mouths look really sloppy, and the shoe laces on the boots and the greenish part of the boot on the right is a different size than the one on the left, even accounting for perspective.

You show promise though, hope you continue working on your stuff!

Tainted-Tayl responds:

Understandable, thanks for the critique. (:

[Carnivore]

Good Start!

As a robot drawer guy thing myself, the best advice I can give you is make sure you're taking the time to think about each part separately instead of just drawing the connecting lines.

Take your time with learning basic skeletal structure and anatomy, and then you can really start toying around with robot stuff!

Hope to see you produce lots more stuff as it seems like you've got pretty neat ideas, but your execution is way off. Keep practicing and keep going!

shadowthe1337 responds:

thanks for the advice. got any ideas on how to go learning that kind of stuff?

[Square Fair]

Way too bright.

As much as I love energy effects, you still need to be able to tell what's going on.

Also the front of his hair looks like there's no volume to it at all, like it's slicked and flattened down right against his head.

mydarksides responds:

Thanks,
although the picture is supposed to be unidentified like that.
tho your right about the hair :p

[Puppet Master]

I like this picture

far more than I like you.

The-Swain responds:

I don't mind the 7 because I blammed metal gill

[1 2 3 4!]

I would be lion

if I said I didn't like this.

Mekka23 responds:

lmao i have no witty response. I applaud you

[sexy tigress]

I'd yiff it.

That's some fine tail I'd be chasing.

I really like the coloring.

Good use of orange and black.

furrytiger responds:

thanks

[beetle marm]

-10 for poor thumbnail

+19 for art.

Great overall, really like how I can see the light coming down from the openings.

The eye on the monkey on one side though looks like totally on a seperate spacing than the other though, or maybe's it's the nose getting shoved over so far to the left.

Either way, great composition.

sucho responds:

yea, i should have deepened the shadows between his far eye and the bridge of his nose, his eyes are pretty far apart.

[2010 NG calender entry]

I like the overall piece.

If I could change a single thing though, I'd get rid of the onion skinning effect on the upper right since, you're implying motion with the character's body position already, and on a poster, it'd wind up just not looking right, as you have it overlapping on the wall shadow as well, so it just doesn't make much sense to keep it there.

You may want to position the arms at the same height so that his pointed elbows and arms act as an eye draw towards the focal point (the plant), as they are on separate levels, and it creates an unbalanced look. Symmetry here could really strengthen a fantastic piece.

Really fun piece though, and a good composition.

LiLg responds:

Hey! thanks for the tip (I actually already got rid of the onion skinned fetus in all my other versions but I forgot to update this one - sorry about that - I'll fix it now)