Score: 5

"Unfocused"

submission: Ex-Zip-It-A

date: June 8, 2007

It's a fairly marginal first effort. The sounds alone are passable, however combined, the piece itself moves in a moreso randomized fashion, bringing to mind a notion of you toying around trying to find a song within a pile of noise. You will need to work a bit hard on bringing a solid drive into your songs if you wish to impress the crowd. You have potential, but this track seems to be more so about just adding a few tweaks and drums with out really caring which step comes in where, leading it to feel disoriented and all around unfocused.

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Score: 6

"Clean loop, but the focus should be elsewhere"

submission: Playing in the Puddle (loop)

date: June 8, 2007

The loop itself is good, however, I'd honestly enjoy it far more if the cymbal was toned down. It's tinny sound kills/ brings you out of what is otherwise a fairly decent ethereal track. It's fairly good, has a nice mood, and I'd describe it as a kind of bubbly lift up. Adding a very small touch of bass, or perhaps just bringing the overall main flow to the front would be a much better choice. However, I think this is a good start, and I'll hope to see more of you as you're now approved. Welcome to the AP. :)

Score: 6

"I found it tended to drag on(no pun intended)"

submission: here there be dragons

date: September 3, 2003

Slow build up, and long riffs don't seem right, but it still works.

Score: 7

"More soothing than I expected."

submission: Guitar Groove

date: September 3, 2003

I was surprising at the easy synergy of the guitar and synth, though the initial hit of it comes of as clunky.

Score: 7

"Glad to approve this."

submission: The Gathering

date: September 3, 2003

The initial down beat is offset by the face paced drizzles of iffy pops. Nice.

Score: 9

"I really think this is great...."

submission: Alien Circus

date: September 1, 2003

though my headache says otherwise.

Score: 5

"Not that high quality."

submission: Metal Guitar w/ Techno Beat

date: September 1, 2003

The loop is choppy, and it doesn't seem to work well, though it is a nice riff.

Score: 7

"Adam Nuemann is my fat bitch."

submission: The Hubies - Chubby's Revenge

date: September 1, 2003

OMG YOU FUKKING SUKKOR! HOW Dare you ABUSE MY EIARSSW!!!!!!1

seriously. It's nice.

Score: 6

"I really like that."

submission: X-Role - BackYardBreak

date: September 1, 2003

Very nice beat. Little dirty on the recording but still nice.