Score: 5

"Unfocused"

submission: Ex-Zip-It-A

date: June 8, 2007

It's a fairly marginal first effort. The sounds alone are passable, however combined, the piece itself moves in a moreso randomized fashion, bringing to mind a notion of you toying around trying to find a song within a pile of noise. You will need to work a bit hard on bringing a solid drive into your songs if you wish to impress the crowd. You have potential, but this track seems to be more so about just adding a few tweaks and drums with out really caring which step comes in where, leading it to feel disoriented and all around unfocused.

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Score: 6

"I found it tended to drag on(no pun intended)"

submission: here there be dragons

date: September 3, 2003

Slow build up, and long riffs don't seem right, but it still works.