Score: 7

"Wow!"

submission: Surr

date: November 14, 2005

This is great! One of the funnest things I've played in a while. It's too short though. I beat it in about 3 minutes. That's great though, one of the best games on the portal. Just add more levels and you're on your way to a featured selection!

Very very impressed.

also you spelled 'objective' without the last e.

Score: 3

"Don't bother with squeaky voice, man."

submission: Feel in Love with a Girl

date: November 14, 2005

That really detracts from the whole. BTW, if recall correctly, the song title is 'Fell in love with a girl'. I'm pretty sure.

Score: 5

"Very nice job..."

submission: Space Jock Jam

date: November 13, 2005

The actual animation honestly I don't care for, but if you were able to spend more time and fully work the animations so they weren't so jerky it'd honestly score very high. I was impressed with your syncs at least. Going on a frame by frame basis can be tedious but needed for the animation, your best bet though is if you really are willing to rework this down the line, then you should break the words down, and phoenetically draw each word to a characters mouth. Looking in a mirror helps a lot with this.

Good job, and great effort.

Score: 4

"Good job, but missing key features."

submission: Burn Stuff

date: November 4, 2005

You may want to list the fact that the ctrl button is used to fire.
Also just a neat trick is tweek out the volume control so that at seperate levels that flame grows higher or lower.
Interesting attempt at this though. I'd make the flames a little lower in size though as it gets fairly hard to see the screen if you hold down ctrl.

I'd look forward to your next attempt though, good job!

Score: 4

"This shows alot of promise..."

submission: Creatures From the Floor

date: November 3, 2005

Things that you should add though...

penalties for missing, so the game has an end, along with the score then meaning something.

Also, your hit detection is slightly off, or very small as I kept missing though I was just to left part of the head or right part, though clearly striking the head.

Perhaps, you could also add seperate hit locations, so the death animation wasn't always the same.

You should strong talent, and should keep up the good work!

Score: 4

"Honestly, I didn't care for it."

submission: Fake Commercials

date: October 26, 2005

However, that shouldn't discourage you. Your tweening was very rough, as was the flow of your movie. You honestly don't really have enough of an introduction to truly say it qualifies for a replay. You should take the animation you used during the introduction, and revise it so that the credits roll after the movie. You also spelt Corona wrong, as it's bottle is clearly seen on the beach. You also tend to show a single point of animation in a clip, with only one focal point. If you wish to add more humor to a piece like this I'd highly recommend giving the audience a bit more to look at than a moving mouth.

Keep trying though.

Best wishes, Jonas.

PS. I need no cookies.

Score: 6

"I'm still laughing..."

submission: zelda by the rabbit joint

date: November 23, 2003

at anyone who thinks it's System of a Down who did this. Anyways, you seem to have problems with synch at the very end, but your animation is slick, anyways all I'd really suggest is synching it better, and then pointing and laughing at the SOAD fans.

Score: 8

"The best efforts laid waste."

submission: ¡Viva La Lollergate!

date: November 22, 2003

I feel all your loss. When a thread is born unto the BBS, we can never know the life expectancy, though in our hearts, we must allow it to live forever.

Epitath to Lollergate
<3 Jonas.

Score: 6

"I can't argue."

submission: PeachClocks Adventure

date: November 17, 2003

Spiderman was right. Vote 5.

~Bitterclock

Score: 8

"Quite good."

submission: Kerri's Big Invention

date: November 16, 2003

I got the secret little 'Silly Hats Only' sign referance. I know of your shameful secret, 'DON HERTZFELD IS GOD!'

BWAHAHAHAHAHA