Score: 8

"What a creepy ass little game"

submission: Shadows fall

date: January 13, 2006

You got me to jump with that god damn music!!!

I'm really pleased playing this. A little short but it's chapters apperantly? You need something to explain the main character then and why you are where you are. It's also silly to have the flashlight able to rotate a full 360 degrees, you should limit that.

Also the fading with the girl at the end is really bad. It's easily seen that it's a bunch of shapes and kills the mood a little.

VERY IMPRESSIVE.

Thank you for making it, looking forward to the next.

Score: 6

"You've got a great potential here."

submission: Rumbel

date: January 13, 2006

The first thing I would do is cut the preloader garbage about $100. It's unfunny and clutters up the start.

Secondly, the 'Bad Ass' you add in is actually 'Whoomp THERE IT IS', you may wish to change the words.

Third, I really think you did a job synching, and that should be applauded.

Fourth, your tweens are very smooth and good, but more time needs to be spent on developing a better drawing style as the small graphics were better ever time I saw them versus any human or animal you drew. Spend more time with that aspect, and it'll work out well for you.

Finally, keep going. You are doing really well, and this was a good effort!

Score: 7

"Very interesting"

submission: a

date: January 10, 2006

It's a really great game, I would have enjoyed it a bit more though if there was a true change in Y and X axis, rather than sticking to a single position on the screen. Easy sum up, it'd be fun to see the giraffe bounce everywhere instead of just across.

Bitterclock.

Score: 9

"Thank you."

submission: -MASS-

date: December 21, 2005

That is everything I've ever wanted in a flash. You make a solid point, and build it up very well throughout the movie. Good job, and best wishes on future flash.

Score: 6

"A decent preview but it really doesn't say much..."

submission: The Island: CC & LL

date: December 16, 2005

I guess that's why they call it a teaser.

Bitterclock

Score: 7

"Man, I was freaked out."

submission: Julekort

date: December 16, 2005

Mostly because my name is Jonas, and I'm wondering what the credits say. Regards, decent flash, though for a real Xmas card you should add an email to a friend option, and a replay button as well.

Score: 9

"Every time I look in the mirror I will cry."

submission: !!!JUMP AROUND!!! finale

date: December 15, 2005

You've made an old man happy. You've done well my boy.

Bitterclock.

LOL.

<3

Score: 7

"Wow!"

submission: Surr

date: November 14, 2005

This is great! One of the funnest things I've played in a while. It's too short though. I beat it in about 3 minutes. That's great though, one of the best games on the portal. Just add more levels and you're on your way to a featured selection!

Very very impressed.

also you spelled 'objective' without the last e.

Score: 3

"Don't bother with squeaky voice, man."

submission: Feel in Love with a Girl

date: November 14, 2005

That really detracts from the whole. BTW, if recall correctly, the song title is 'Fell in love with a girl'. I'm pretty sure.

Score: 5

"Very nice job..."

submission: Space Jock Jam

date: November 13, 2005

The actual animation honestly I don't care for, but if you were able to spend more time and fully work the animations so they weren't so jerky it'd honestly score very high. I was impressed with your syncs at least. Going on a frame by frame basis can be tedious but needed for the animation, your best bet though is if you really are willing to rework this down the line, then you should break the words down, and phoenetically draw each word to a characters mouth. Looking in a mirror helps a lot with this.

Good job, and great effort.