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Your over use of stikfas, in random almost pointless mannerisms with no dialouge, and frame by frame numbness is shlock. You're using the addition of frame by frame animation as a file size fluffer, and the music just grates on you. There's no suspense, no feeling for the characters, and no way in hell I'm going to miss this series. The portal needs to stick to flash, not stikfas.
Author's Response:
Ok I try to use voices cant!So stfu and why dont u try and make a flash!
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"Alot better than most small stick fights."
Couple of things.
1. Expand the fight, this was only like 20 seconds?
2. Nice use of multiple vehicles, however the helicopter crashing was a sloppy transistion.
3. The sound effects are grating for the car chase. Add a fast action loop in instead, or a better car one.
4. Large abrupt pause between the grenade being thrown, and exploding. Hand draw the explosion or render it. Either way.
You're on your way, but try to avoid stick flash, though this is one of the few stick flashes that shows promise. Esp for under 100k.
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That's great stuff. Just wondering, who provided that really cool loop on the card? Email Tom, see if he'll put the card on the site. File size be damned!
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The easter egg was the best part. Stop it! You're embarrassing yourselves!
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Lucky I don't have 56k. Anyways, a very nice 'tribute' to Jesus. Regardless, you should try something with more of a synch to the music. It's all about maintaining audience interest.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you were one of the viewers who had to see this first submission of the out-of-sync-submission of this piece. The only reason I could think of why it became out of sync, was that it was imported into Flash without sound, and I then added the audio using the technique that NG prefers us to use to reduce file size. This must’ve conflicted with the timing and caused it to drag. And, from what it looks like, I failed to maintain the audiences’ attention because they aren’t used to seeing animations like this. I hope you got to view the updated version, so that you won’t forever remember this piece as being to big for quality. Thanks for the review!
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However, Pineappleclock isn't in the credits!
Author's Response:
i know..it got messed up..sry bout that lol
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God damn Squeezy is fucking annoying! Trying to pimp his shit in a shitfree market! Fucking thank you for telling the BBS jackass that he needs to get some talent before he whines about others!
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I called it your topic, did I not? Top 5 all the way. Great stuff. Anyways, the character may need a slight retooling, but you've got great stuff on here... but I've already told you that. Do you plan on staying with anthropomorphism in lead, with murray fighting animal/people, or are there actual people in this world? I was mildly confused by when the women rescued was just a human? Ah well, see ya in your topic soon enough with some kind yer pic. Also I'm curious as to if you're staying with the music video theme? ... and finally, what kind of shading did you do for the freeze frames? It looks cool as hell.
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Incredibly refreshing addition to the portal. Thank you.
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Suggestions for the second.
1. Continous loop of music
2. Instead of giving up everything in the beginning, have some of the more interesting weapons appear as power ups.
3. Larger levels
4. Different enemies
5. Vehicles
6. Bonus game where you fight a nigh unstoppable horde of zombies.
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