Score: 3

"I'm glad this is the last."

submission: Stikfas L

date: September 30, 2003

Your over use of stikfas, in random almost pointless mannerisms with no dialouge, and frame by frame numbness is shlock. You're using the addition of frame by frame animation as a file size fluffer, and the music just grates on you. There's no suspense, no feeling for the characters, and no way in hell I'm going to miss this series. The portal needs to stick to flash, not stikfas.

Score: 4

"Alot better than most small stick fights."

submission: A modern Duel

date: September 30, 2003

Couple of things.
1. Expand the fight, this was only like 20 seconds?
2. Nice use of multiple vehicles, however the helicopter crashing was a sloppy transistion.
3. The sound effects are grating for the car chase. Add a fast action loop in instead, or a better car one.
4. Large abrupt pause between the grenade being thrown, and exploding. Hand draw the explosion or render it. Either way.

You're on your way, but try to avoid stick flash, though this is one of the few stick flashes that shows promise. Esp for under 100k.

Score: 8

"Thanks Will."

submission: NG Halloween!

date: September 30, 2003

That's great stuff. Just wondering, who provided that really cool loop on the card? Email Tom, see if he'll put the card on the site. File size be damned!

Score: 7

"That was a great movie."

submission: Harry meets Dumbledore

date: September 30, 2003

The easter egg was the best part. Stop it! You're embarrassing yourselves!

Score: 7

"Wow, that was short."

submission: "Jesus Christ" promo

date: September 27, 2003

Lucky I don't have 56k. Anyways, a very nice 'tribute' to Jesus. Regardless, you should try something with more of a synch to the music. It's all about maintaining audience interest.

Score: 6

"Nice, and short."

submission: tree loving

date: September 25, 2003

However, Pineappleclock isn't in the credits!

Score: 8

"Thank you!"

submission: Squeezy vs. The Rabbit

date: September 25, 2003

God damn Squeezy is fucking annoying! Trying to pimp his shit in a shitfree market! Fucking thank you for telling the BBS jackass that he needs to get some talent before he whines about others!

Score: 9

"By far one of my favs."

submission: Murray the Monkey ep. 1

date: September 24, 2003

I called it your topic, did I not? Top 5 all the way. Great stuff. Anyways, the character may need a slight retooling, but you've got great stuff on here... but I've already told you that. Do you plan on staying with anthropomorphism in lead, with murray fighting animal/people, or are there actual people in this world? I was mildly confused by when the women rescued was just a human? Ah well, see ya in your topic soon enough with some kind yer pic. Also I'm curious as to if you're staying with the music video theme? ... and finally, what kind of shading did you do for the freeze frames? It looks cool as hell.

Score: 8

"That was bizarre."

submission: Silly Slumber

date: September 23, 2003

Incredibly refreshing addition to the portal. Thank you.

Score: 8

"Great Game."

submission: Rampage

date: September 22, 2003

Suggestions for the second.

1. Continous loop of music
2. Instead of giving up everything in the beginning, have some of the more interesting weapons appear as power ups.
3. Larger levels
4. Different enemies
5. Vehicles
6. Bonus game where you fight a nigh unstoppable horde of zombies.