Score: 4

"Good job, but missing key features."

submission: Burn Stuff

date: November 4, 2005

You may want to list the fact that the ctrl button is used to fire.
Also just a neat trick is tweek out the volume control so that at seperate levels that flame grows higher or lower.
Interesting attempt at this though. I'd make the flames a little lower in size though as it gets fairly hard to see the screen if you hold down ctrl.

I'd look forward to your next attempt though, good job!

Score: 4

"This shows alot of promise..."

submission: Creatures From the Floor

date: November 3, 2005

Things that you should add though...

penalties for missing, so the game has an end, along with the score then meaning something.

Also, your hit detection is slightly off, or very small as I kept missing though I was just to left part of the head or right part, though clearly striking the head.

Perhaps, you could also add seperate hit locations, so the death animation wasn't always the same.

You should strong talent, and should keep up the good work!

Score: 4

"Honestly, I didn't care for it."

submission: Fake Commercials

date: October 26, 2005

However, that shouldn't discourage you. Your tweening was very rough, as was the flow of your movie. You honestly don't really have enough of an introduction to truly say it qualifies for a replay. You should take the animation you used during the introduction, and revise it so that the credits roll after the movie. You also spelt Corona wrong, as it's bottle is clearly seen on the beach. You also tend to show a single point of animation in a clip, with only one focal point. If you wish to add more humor to a piece like this I'd highly recommend giving the audience a bit more to look at than a moving mouth.

Keep trying though.

Best wishes, Jonas.

PS. I need no cookies.

Score: 6

"I'm still laughing..."

submission: zelda by the rabbit joint

date: November 23, 2003

at anyone who thinks it's System of a Down who did this. Anyways, you seem to have problems with synch at the very end, but your animation is slick, anyways all I'd really suggest is synching it better, and then pointing and laughing at the SOAD fans.

Score: 8

"The best efforts laid waste."

submission: ¡Viva La Lollergate!

date: November 22, 2003

I feel all your loss. When a thread is born unto the BBS, we can never know the life expectancy, though in our hearts, we must allow it to live forever.

Epitath to Lollergate
<3 Jonas.

Score: 6

"I can't argue."

submission: PeachClocks Adventure

date: November 17, 2003

Spiderman was right. Vote 5.

~Bitterclock

Score: 8

"Quite good."

submission: Kerri's Big Invention

date: November 16, 2003

I got the secret little 'Silly Hats Only' sign referance. I know of your shameful secret, 'DON HERTZFELD IS GOD!'

BWAHAHAHAHAHA

Score: 9

"Thanks."

submission: Ready's Voyage

date: November 15, 2003

One of the greatest movies on Newgrounds. I humbly thank you DanMalo(one word, Bitch). My only concern is the ever increasing quality of your flash. However will you be able to top this. Thanks a lot Dan. Thanks a lot.

Score: 8

"I fucking burst out lauging."

submission: Retarded Toaster Ep1

date: November 9, 2003

The use of 'el oh el oh el' was ingenious. I fucking laughed so hard. My god that was great.

Score: 6

"Good."

submission: "Girls"

date: October 28, 2003

It felt like you should have kept going with it. You should have thrown a nut shot for one of the guys as well. Bah. Here's your review.