Score: 8

"oh man... that was good."

submission: CC-How Jason Got His Mask

date: January 13, 2006

Very few people remember Jason is actually just a retarded podunk kid.

<3 Bitterclock

Score: 6

"You've got a great potential here."

submission: Rumbel

date: January 13, 2006

The first thing I would do is cut the preloader garbage about $100. It's unfunny and clutters up the start.

Secondly, the 'Bad Ass' you add in is actually 'Whoomp THERE IT IS', you may wish to change the words.

Third, I really think you did a job synching, and that should be applauded.

Fourth, your tweens are very smooth and good, but more time needs to be spent on developing a better drawing style as the small graphics were better ever time I saw them versus any human or animal you drew. Spend more time with that aspect, and it'll work out well for you.

Finally, keep going. You are doing really well, and this was a good effort!

Score: 9

"Thank you."

submission: -MASS-

date: December 21, 2005

That is everything I've ever wanted in a flash. You make a solid point, and build it up very well throughout the movie. Good job, and best wishes on future flash.

Score: 9

"Every time I look in the mirror I will cry."

submission: !!!JUMP AROUND!!! finale

date: December 15, 2005

You've made an old man happy. You've done well my boy.

Bitterclock.

LOL.

<3

Score: 7

"Wow!"

submission: Surr

date: November 14, 2005

This is great! One of the funnest things I've played in a while. It's too short though. I beat it in about 3 minutes. That's great though, one of the best games on the portal. Just add more levels and you're on your way to a featured selection!

Very very impressed.

also you spelled 'objective' without the last e.

Score: 4

"Honestly, I didn't care for it."

submission: Fake Commercials

date: October 26, 2005

However, that shouldn't discourage you. Your tweening was very rough, as was the flow of your movie. You honestly don't really have enough of an introduction to truly say it qualifies for a replay. You should take the animation you used during the introduction, and revise it so that the credits roll after the movie. You also spelt Corona wrong, as it's bottle is clearly seen on the beach. You also tend to show a single point of animation in a clip, with only one focal point. If you wish to add more humor to a piece like this I'd highly recommend giving the audience a bit more to look at than a moving mouth.

Keep trying though.

Best wishes, Jonas.

PS. I need no cookies.

Score: 6

"I'm still laughing..."

submission: zelda by the rabbit joint

date: November 23, 2003

at anyone who thinks it's System of a Down who did this. Anyways, you seem to have problems with synch at the very end, but your animation is slick, anyways all I'd really suggest is synching it better, and then pointing and laughing at the SOAD fans.

Score: 6

"I can't argue."

submission: PeachClocks Adventure

date: November 17, 2003

Spiderman was right. Vote 5.

~Bitterclock

Score: 9

"Thanks."

submission: Ready's Voyage

date: November 15, 2003

One of the greatest movies on Newgrounds. I humbly thank you DanMalo(one word, Bitch). My only concern is the ever increasing quality of your flash. However will you be able to top this. Thanks a lot Dan. Thanks a lot.

Score: 7

"Short and sweet."

submission: Lester's Life - Love

date: September 30, 2003

You needed to add nothing more to get the joke across. Great little movie.