Jonas's Reviews

[Madagascar]

I told you I was going to upvote this. I am not a lying liar.

[DR. BEES RETURNS!]

It's wonderful and handsome and full of bees. Just as I pictured heaven.

[Hey, Girl]

I can't wait to see the sequel Hey, Boy.

[FIVE/5]

Really enjoyable.

Had a blast blowing through every thing.

I could recommend showing a small icon on the side of the tunnel that isn't completed so they understand what your hint is talking about.

Really had fun though, my only real complaint was the whole screen size was a bit small, and all the pieces were great, but you never really had to string together more than I believe four at one time to get any where. I'd really like to see some more of this though, and love the concept.

Keep up the good work!!

[Stranger Danger Game]

This Game would be better

if Chris O'Neill wasn't a child molester in real life.

[Notepad Drawing Collab 09]

Good overall.

I'm a bit disappointed by the floaty quality of entries that were let into the collab itself, but ultimately, I'm happy to be part of it. Thanks for whomever PMed me asking me to produce some quick art for this.

Great job.

JKAmovies responds:

No probs, I'm glad you liked it ;D

[VOICE REEL 2012!]

Way too derivative of my imitations of your voice. <3

[V103 - The Raven Spoken Poetry]

Serious static issues

Your voice is fairly decent, but your background noise is just terrible, really kills the whole thing. Would love to see a cleaned up version, as it drags your whole submission down.

Vertigo103 responds:

What? there isn't any noise that I can hear? what are you talking about? lol? what?

[Commercial demo]

Music is jarring along with speaking volume.

Your voices don't show a lot of differences, just you mostly speaking at slightly different speed, or mildly different tone. My best advice is make sure that you're focused on genuine variety from the start. The music is competing with your voice as well, which isn't something you should really want at all. If you're looking for something that shows commercial viability, you need to really give this a bit more polish, so I hope to see something down the road!

linktube responds:

You know now that I look back at this I see what you mean. When I made this I wasn't exactly sure what to do for a commercial demo so I just kinda threw together a few sample's of things I heard on the radio. But I do understand where you are coming from, a demo should be showing everything one can do. As for the music I do suppose it could be toned down a bit as well. Thank you very much for your honesty and critique!

[Dumbventure Page 2]

As much effort as you're putting into this, I feel like skimping on the page number vs using a nicer font/ something that looks better is dropping the ball right at the end.

[NEW BORN]

That looks just the most painful of toe stubs.

[Wooden Binary Sword]

How did you make a wooden sword without wood? Was the wood saw made of wood? That wood make sense.

8madness responds:

excuse me, but I think you read wrong the comment.