Jonas's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nine]

Cool pic.

What's Newgrouns.com?

Catoblepas responds:

Do I always have to FUCK up EVERYTHING?

[Pouncing]

Terrible overall.

Your anatomy needs an incredible amount of work.

Starting with the basics.

You failed to close the line at the top of the head, so it bleeds right into the tail.

The calves come off at seperate angles, which is physically impossible.
One calf even starts under the line, meaning the leg somehow started forming mid thigh.

You drew the breasts incredibly unshapely and rough, showing multiple juts that shouldn't be there for a smooth shape, such a breast.

The line work on the right ear some how meets up with what I'm assuming is the hair line behind the head causing it to look flat, and misshap
en compared to the other ear. I'm talking about the one with earrings.

Your shoulders are of two different sizes.

You didn't bother to account for a back on the character. Your use of extreme foreshortening has in fact cut this character's back side out completely.

The angle of the head versus where her hair fails over also kills her left cheek bone, meaning her head is deformed.

It doesn't look like you bothered to do much of a rough layout over all with the character, and I would strongly recommend you get the basic structure and anatomy of a character down before diving into the full drawing.

I would also recommend investing in a french curve, and lighter pencils so you have an easier time erasing.

You may also wish for shadows to use a shading stub, instead of just scrawling lines under the character, and drawing a line around the outline. It'll look a lot better overall.

FrauPusie responds:

Thanks much for taking the time really write out a real critique. As for anatomy I am very inexperienced and am still learn and your review does point out many issues that I will try to adress in later pieces. As for this piece specifictly I made out of the spur of the moment and was thinking extreme which can accout for the multiple errors. Thanks much and please take time to look over my other pieces when you can. :)

[DRUNK ALEX]

You shouldn't have been there Jeff.

You should have been finishing that round Mike bought you.

That's an amazing pic either way. I should have gotten one, but ah well, I have my Sagat statue. One of 400... and you have your picture... one of a kind.

Fuck.

JohnnyUtah responds:

oh shut up jonas.

p.s. ask swain to do his "jonas impression"

[Akuma]

Probably one of my favorite works

Though to be a true raging asshole, he'd be keying my car outside of Wawa, while hitting on my gal.

Great job on those stilted sandals. It's a really strong remake.

JohnnyUtah responds:

oh you.

[ArtistIncompre Gift]

Waste of time

This shows you didn't even put time in as a gift to your friend. Terrible anatomy, even for a chibi character, sloppy line work, and terrible use of random blurring and highlights. This is not worth space on the art portal, this should have been kept in your scraps.

Unigodspawn responds:

this is not a chibi, the chibi is gay, who care if i put time in this gift?? and... why you lost your time writing bullshit??

[That Was Fun]

Nice idea, poor composition.

Your coloring is alright, but the obvious slop job on the background detracts from everything.

Your outlines on the characters don't match the general shape of the characters, nor do they even reach the bottom of the page.

You in fact didn't bother to erase the coloring on the legs of one on the left, as the white can clearly be seen poking through the calves. The blue one's coloring can be seen poking through the outline of their thigh, which is completely disproportionate to the body.

Your head sizing is well off, and causes the blue one to look very flat and muted. It is very small and misshaped.

The outlines where it crosses along the ball are not following the arm shape and the thicker ones actually go into the ball. This is a terribly sloppy effort, and all around looking quite rushed.

Hellknight1000 responds:

Wowwwww, this is like, the first REAL review I've gotten...
Much appreciated. I'll be sure to try and improve upon these points.

[paper goo]

I really enjoy this picture.

You really know how to draw.

Oh I apologize.

I'm a poor liar. AT BEST.

We weep for your future.

Love The-Swain

Sincerly, Jonas

We are officially over.

bobbinter responds:

Im trying to respond,
but I really have no idea what you mean.
1 out of 10?
Its better than 0

[Teh Darkness]

Why I voted low.

Shit quality, terrible compression, artifacting, color distortion, and minimal effort.

That work?

tehslaphappy responds:

Yeah, that works for me.

I still love you.