You've got a good grasp on color ideas, but your execution and line work is muddy. Your anatomy is really off on the eye floating on the socket portion. I hope you continue exploring your ideas and keep practicing as you've got a great foundation, but you need to keep hammering away at getting the idea solidified. The line muddying may be caused by drawing at a lower DPI, so you might want to think about increasing it if you're trying to draw small. It's simple to shrink a piece down digitally, but far harder to correct over something that is smaller to begin with.
Keep on drawing!
Thanks ill keep that in mind. I really appreciate it.
That looks just the most painful of toe stubs.
You and I have differences on what constitutes an elf, and I will fight you to the death over them.
yes but we both have our merits in our opinions and both our opinions can be valid hehehe
thanks for the review!
How did you make a wooden sword without wood? Was the wood saw made of wood? That wood make sense.
excuse me, but I think you read wrong the comment.
I like the style. Keeping putting some more stuff up.
I can't tell jokes because I'm a comedian.
I can write an unfunny response because I'm... fuck.
I blame myself.
As a robot drawer guy thing myself, the best advice I can give you is make sure you're taking the time to think about each part separately instead of just drawing the connecting lines.
Take your time with learning basic skeletal structure and anatomy, and then you can really start toying around with robot stuff!
Hope to see you produce lots more stuff as it seems like you've got pretty neat ideas, but your execution is way off. Keep practicing and keep going!
thanks for the advice. got any ideas on how to go learning that kind of stuff?
He looks really awesome.
I really like the jungle plains forest he's leaping into/ out of.
You even got his hair correct, and his mean look real good.
He has strong muscles from hugging his mother.
You messed up my shitty facial hair.
I like how Jeff can't be bothered to lift his fists into action, merely clench them as he ruminates.
Also Oney looks like the manliest piece of shit ever for a girl.
Great job :3
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