Jonas's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dumbventure Page 2]

As much effort as you're putting into this, I feel like skimping on the page number vs using a nicer font/ something that looks better is dropping the ball right at the end.

[NEW BORN]

That looks just the most painful of toe stubs.

[Wooden Binary Sword]

How did you make a wooden sword without wood? Was the wood saw made of wood? That wood make sense.

8madness responds:

excuse me, but I think you read wrong the comment.

[Jokes]

I can't tell jokes because I'm a comedian.

ToonHole responds:

I can write an unfunny response because I'm... fuck.

[BEEBO Can Has Cigarettez?]

I blame myself.

[.:Prince Of Anthropomorphism:.]

Really good colors, but you need to work on your line weights, and pay attention to the details as well.

You show a good sense of composition, but your monster mouths look really sloppy, and the shoe laces on the boots and the greenish part of the boot on the right is a different size than the one on the left, even accounting for perspective.

You show promise though, hope you continue working on your stuff!

Tainted-Tayl responds:

Understandable, thanks for the critique. (:

[Carnivore]

Good Start!

As a robot drawer guy thing myself, the best advice I can give you is make sure you're taking the time to think about each part separately instead of just drawing the connecting lines.

Take your time with learning basic skeletal structure and anatomy, and then you can really start toying around with robot stuff!

Hope to see you produce lots more stuff as it seems like you've got pretty neat ideas, but your execution is way off. Keep practicing and keep going!

shadowthe1337 responds:

thanks for the advice. got any ideas on how to go learning that kind of stuff?

[blanka iz hella tight]

He looks really awesome.

I really like the jungle plains forest he's leaping into/ out of.

You even got his hair correct, and his mean look real good.

Great job.

He has strong muscles from hugging his mother.

[Newgrounds Sprite guys!]

You messed up my shitty facial hair.

I like how Jeff can't be bothered to lift his fists into action, merely clench them as he ruminates.

Also Oney looks like the manliest piece of shit ever for a girl.

Great job :3

[red hood]

Nice stuff!

I'm a huge fan of traditional ink styles and cross hatching and stippling, but your cross hatching on the border got sloppy, and I can see over run lines from the unzoomed view crossing over the black border and that just kills me that in such a nice picture, there wasn't any thought given to cleaning it up a little.

Keep it up though, this is fantastic stuff.