This is pretty terrible.
Your character models are completely stiff, and over all, your muzzles look like someone repeatedly smashed them with a fist.
Your text is added on, and looks terribly distracting with the seeming sloppy addition of them into this comic.
The coloring is almost adequate, but then the shading makes almost no sense what so ever.
You need tons more practice.
Probably one of my favorite works
Though to be a true raging asshole, he'd be keying my car outside of Wawa, while hitting on my gal.
Great job on those stilted sandals. It's a really strong remake.
oh you.
Waste of time
This shows you didn't even put time in as a gift to your friend. Terrible anatomy, even for a chibi character, sloppy line work, and terrible use of random blurring and highlights. This is not worth space on the art portal, this should have been kept in your scraps.
this is not a chibi, the chibi is gay, who care if i put time in this gift?? and... why you lost your time writing bullshit??
Wow.
She looks like she could crush anything with those huge tits. The rain effect is nice, except it's killed by the fact that the character has absolutely no rain hitting them. Just a separate filtered layer, without anything interacting with each other.
I might have also done a slightly darker tone on the inner ear since it's brighter than it should be and seems to pop out and float, rather than convey depth.
Nice idea, poor composition.
Your coloring is alright, but the obvious slop job on the background detracts from everything.
Your outlines on the characters don't match the general shape of the characters, nor do they even reach the bottom of the page.
You in fact didn't bother to erase the coloring on the legs of one on the left, as the white can clearly be seen poking through the calves. The blue one's coloring can be seen poking through the outline of their thigh, which is completely disproportionate to the body.
Your head sizing is well off, and causes the blue one to look very flat and muted. It is very small and misshaped.
The outlines where it crosses along the ball are not following the arm shape and the thicker ones actually go into the ball. This is a terribly sloppy effort, and all around looking quite rushed.
Wowwwww, this is like, the first REAL review I've gotten...
Much appreciated. I'll be sure to try and improve upon these points.
I really enjoy this picture.
You really know how to draw.
Oh I apologize.
I'm a poor liar. AT BEST.
We weep for your future.
Love The-Swain
Sincerly, Jonas
We are officially over.
Im trying to respond,
but I really have no idea what you mean.
1 out of 10?
Its better than 0
Why I voted low.
Shit quality, terrible compression, artifacting, color distortion, and minimal effort.
That work?
There is a conspiracy within this sentence.
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