Looking good!

Only small things for you - if any of your VAs have accounts here - feel free to add them in the project portion so they can appear on the main page and get creditted on their NG accounts as being part of this.

Also was a little weird that there was no text on the sign of the Admin building?

Great work - happy to see some toon stuff here!

I told you I was going to upvote this. I am not a lying liar.

It's wonderful and handsome and full of bees. Just as I pictured heaven.

Really enjoyable.

Had a blast blowing through every thing.

I could recommend showing a small icon on the side of the tunnel that isn't completed so they understand what your hint is talking about.

Really had fun though, my only real complaint was the whole screen size was a bit small, and all the pieces were great, but you never really had to string together more than I believe four at one time to get any where. I'd really like to see some more of this though, and love the concept.

Keep up the good work!!

This Game would be better

if Chris O'Neill wasn't a child molester in real life.

Good overall.

I'm a bit disappointed by the floaty quality of entries that were let into the collab itself, but ultimately, I'm happy to be part of it. Thanks for whomever PMed me asking me to produce some quick art for this.

Great job.

Serious static issues

Your voice is fairly decent, but your background noise is just terrible, really kills the whole thing. Would love to see a cleaned up version, as it drags your whole submission down.

Music is jarring along with speaking volume.

Your voices don't show a lot of differences, just you mostly speaking at slightly different speed, or mildly different tone. My best advice is make sure that you're focused on genuine variety from the start. The music is competing with your voice as well, which isn't something you should really want at all. If you're looking for something that shows commercial viability, you need to really give this a bit more polish, so I hope to see something down the road!

As much effort as you're putting into this, I feel like skimping on the page number vs using a nicer font/ something that looks better is dropping the ball right at the end.

That looks just the most painful of toe stubs.

How did you make a wooden sword without wood? Was the wood saw made of wood? That wood make sense.