Jonas's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Avatar - Hot Na'vi Sex]

What a poor representation.

Your animation was okay, but those don't even look like Smurfs. Nor does that cum on the female's face even look remotely realistic. I'm starting to have doubts about you EVER having ejaculations on alien species, Harry. You really need to do a lot more research before you decide to make a documentary like this on different cultures.

You get a C+ on your foreign affairs final.

Haha, affairs. Like how he cheated on the whole human race.

[[ Prototype Parody ]]

Not too terrible.

You would do well to expand on this. Looking forward to seeing it longer.

[The Library Party]

C-C-C-Combo Breaker.

Seriously, short, funny, and too the point. It was a well executed idea that you made into a reality. Could ask for little else.

BadBoyMcCoy responds:

thanks man, much appreciated

[Failed Mugging]

Decent.

Good quick animation, good body movement, but your mugger voice sounds distant.

Also what's up with 'Don't jump off a pier?'

[An Animator's Dilemma]

Boy oh Boy,

I think most of us have all run into this. Seriously, I have no idea why Adobe can't have an option to auto save every 10 minutes or something.

I lost about two hours of work, but I freaked, since I use two folders for saving my work, I thought I lost 3 days worth. Good thing I'm paranoid.

Clever flash, and true to the real events of what happens when you lose time wasted on animation of ideas.

PJ-Olzow responds:

Apperently its a downloadable plugin on there website T.T, but they should have just built it into the program (though i could see how an autosave could be more destructive than helpful)

Thanks for your review :D

[Tim Burton's Movie Pitch]

Good concept overall.

Your voice work needs some work. It's both muted, and distorted. I would suggest using a general filter on your microphone and getting some basic software (CoolEdit Pro for example ) to help kill any background noise. Toss me a line if you want some help getting your sound quality up.

I really enjoyed the overall execution of the movie and your idea on this though. The slanted windows line was quite funny. The movie felt a bit slow overall pacing wise, and ultimately, the Tim Burton didn't look much like Tim Burton, lack of signs of aging, and generally stringy facial features.

Great stuff either way.

[Pleasure Island 2]

There is nothing more entertaining

than your hot sexed up flashes grace our visual organs.

Regardless, Swain was screaming where is the Walrus Pity for a good five minutes.

Didn't have the heart to tell the poor guy that the movie was over.

Great stuff, slick animation, and wonderful visuals.

Keep it up : )

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks!

your pals with swain? say hi for me.

[The Transformer]

Great stuff.

Absolutely loved your use of perspective and the sudden shift while using Fish Eye effect while he was looking in was great.

[Lil' Hoots]

Meh.

To quote boomer124
"its an owl version of the marvelous misadventures of flapjack."

Animation okay, but it seems like you aped the whole chemistry from flapjack, and everything didn't have a single tinge of soul to it. I kept waiting for something out of left field but literally, you just used the same characters in a separate environment, and in some cases reused the same interactions between the owls and Flapjack and K'nuckles. The biggest example is the first part where you have Lil hoot coming in on the sleeping Owl.

All in all, this would have been alot better if it felt like there was actual substance.

[Exodus Tyson Punched Out]

Dawww....

I'm getting a little choked up watching this.