Jonas's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rumbel]

You've got a great potential here.

The first thing I would do is cut the preloader garbage about $100. It's unfunny and clutters up the start.

Secondly, the 'Bad Ass' you add in is actually 'Whoomp THERE IT IS', you may wish to change the words.

Third, I really think you did a job synching, and that should be applauded.

Fourth, your tweens are very smooth and good, but more time needs to be spent on developing a better drawing style as the small graphics were better ever time I saw them versus any human or animal you drew. Spend more time with that aspect, and it'll work out well for you.

Finally, keep going. You are doing really well, and this was a good effort!

Jovatov responds:

First off, well, I could but I hate boring preloaders where there's nothing to do...
Secondly, I'm not english myself so yeah I could've misheared that.
Third, thanks ^^
Fourth, yeah I know I suck at drawing, if I would put more time in it it would be better, but I just don't have the patience for it...
Fifth, thanks and I will, I enjoy making movies ^^
Sixth, thanks for the big review ^^

[-MASS-]

Thank you.

That is everything I've ever wanted in a flash. You make a solid point, and build it up very well throughout the movie. Good job, and best wishes on future flash.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

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[The Island: CC & LL]

A decent preview but it really doesn't say much...

I guess that's why they call it a teaser.

Bitterclock

[Julekort]

Man, I was freaked out.

Mostly because my name is Jonas, and I'm wondering what the credits say. Regards, decent flash, though for a real Xmas card you should add an email to a friend option, and a replay button as well.

[Feel in Love with a Girl]

Don't bother with squeaky voice, man.

That really detracts from the whole. BTW, if recall correctly, the song title is 'Fell in love with a girl'. I'm pretty sure.

[Space Jock Jam]

Very nice job...

The actual animation honestly I don't care for, but if you were able to spend more time and fully work the animations so they weren't so jerky it'd honestly score very high. I was impressed with your syncs at least. Going on a frame by frame basis can be tedious but needed for the animation, your best bet though is if you really are willing to rework this down the line, then you should break the words down, and phoenetically draw each word to a characters mouth. Looking in a mirror helps a lot with this.

Good job, and great effort.

[zelda by the rabbit joint]

I'm still laughing...

at anyone who thinks it's System of a Down who did this. Anyways, you seem to have problems with synch at the very end, but your animation is slick, anyways all I'd really suggest is synching it better, and then pointing and laughing at the SOAD fans.

skotsoad responds:

thanx for the review,i'm not sure whats wrong with the timing when i was making it, it was all in time and then i had a look at it here and the whole movie was like, 2 seconds late so, i dunno...

[¡Viva La Lollergate!]

The best efforts laid waste.

I feel all your loss. When a thread is born unto the BBS, we can never know the life expectancy, though in our hearts, we must allow it to live forever.

Epitath to Lollergate
<3 Jonas.

[PeachClocks Adventure]

I can't argue.

Spiderman was right. Vote 5.

~Bitterclock

PeachClawk responds:

Yeah spiderman is always right.

[Kerri's Big Invention]

Quite good.

I got the secret little 'Silly Hats Only' sign referance. I know of your shameful secret, 'DON HERTZFELD IS GOD!'

BWAHAHAHAHAHA